今天我们来欣赏两位同学的不同意见


两位同学在意见阐述上都是没有问题的，孩子愿意让父母分享自己的秘密固然是我们特别愿意看到的，但保守自己的秘密也是可以接受的。所以这两篇习作主要从语言和形式上给分。满分15，这也是我给分的正常尺度。
But to be frank, I paid more attention to the second one,especially the reason why the kid strongly refused to share her/his secret with parents. And it was quite a coincidence that we talked about family matters at the very beginning of the week, this very kid reacted oddly in the discussion part during class. I was extremely embarrassed for she refused to answer the question : What profession can you predict the boy will have in the future? Of course, I comforted her to take it easy, but I sensed something unusual in her response. We had a talk after class and I got to know the reason. As is shown, the second one is just the kid's. How I wish my students could finish their writing work happily and could enjoy a harmonious family environment!